For this essay you want to look closely at the following:
Is there strong thesis statement, one that clearly indicates what you are describing for us and why?
Is there a good and solid definition of superhero or supervillain or otherwise provided to us?
Is there good, strong research provided that helps lay out credible reporting on the topic?
Is there a good use of sources, integrated, cited, and explained?
– Check also for grammar and other proofing errors as well.
– Provide any constructive feedback you may wish to impart.
Using the example of Captain America, I want you to see this as helping you move on towards the rest of your paper:
After your introduction and thesis, you need to find and integrate a definition to work from concerning your superhero, supervillain, or anti-hero. Here is an example of a work up of the definitions of comics from Scott McCloud.