Vivid or descriptive details are important to narrative stories for helping us “bring to life” the events in the story and help to paint a picture that we can, when images are not available, imagine in our heads.
Descriptive Details: Vivid details are another crucial element, because they help bring the story to life for the audience. You want to help provide us with the feeling that we are there, with you, in the story. Aim to create “mental sensations of the sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and texture of the world in which your story takes place”
You will then attempt using descriptive and vivid detail, and we will discuss on Monday, to paint a picture of the comic book image below in words.
To put it another way:
Your job is to be able to describe it, written down, as if the audience cannot or will not SEE the image itself. Paint it in words.
I am looking for a nice sized paragraph (4-5 sentences) minimum. I want you to share it with us.
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