For this essay you want to look closely at the following:
Is there strong thesis statement, one that clearly indicates that this is an analytical essay
Is there a good summary? Can you clearly understand what the comic book in question was about?
Is there a strong analysis? Is the analysis going deeper into understanding the comic book? Is it and the summary in balance?
Is there, following the analysis, an evaluation or judgment of the comic book based on a spelled out criteria.
– Check also for grammar and other proofing errors as well.
– Provide any constructive feedback you may wish to impart.