For this essay you want to look closely at the following:
Is there a good “hook” that draws you end to the story in the first posting (Blog Post 1)?
Is there a well told story here? Is it complete with beginning, middle, and end?
Is there enough vivid imagery and material to pull you in, engage your interest, and make you feel like you can visually see and feel the things they describe?
Is there a clear significance conveyed to the reader (you)?
– Check also for grammar and other proofing errors as well.
– Provide any constructive feedback you may wish to impart.